tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7880527679594570984.post3666155373157851453..comments2023-05-03T15:19:56.226+05:30Comments on Dip-Tea Blogs Here...: The broken bridge - A story with two endings.Dipteehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13550275867184412533noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7880527679594570984.post-42139166744735837332013-07-31T10:07:09.185+05:302013-07-31T10:07:09.185+05:30Thanks, JIT.
Well, actually I believe in letting ...Thanks, JIT.<br /><br />Well, actually I believe in letting children live in the world of fantasy till reality hits them. You believe in magic and magic happens. So I will let that be. Thanks anyway. :)Dipteehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13550275867184412533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7880527679594570984.post-90833404213272934082013-07-31T10:03:06.684+05:302013-07-31T10:03:06.684+05:30Thanks, Teena. Yes i am fond of dark stories too.
...Thanks, Teena. Yes i am fond of dark stories too.<br /><br />Thanks for visiting. :)Dipteehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13550275867184412533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7880527679594570984.post-65818229315016571842013-07-31T01:08:03.201+05:302013-07-31T01:08:03.201+05:30Diptee I guess d love for dark shaded stories just...Diptee I guess d love for dark shaded stories just brings out a lot of emotion hence loving d second one.. :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05495745244739220321noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7880527679594570984.post-87091768011172905332013-07-26T10:44:22.888+05:302013-07-26T10:44:22.888+05:30The first ending is definitely a better one.. It i...The first ending is definitely a better one.. It is an expected assumption that a story of a small child will have a happy ending... <br /><br />I would have deleted the last two paragraphs of the first ending and end it with "And then Munna woke up realizing he was dreaming." Could be a cliched one but I believe for children, it is good to show the line of difference between the fantasy world that they build up in mind and the reality. Just a thought.Just In Timehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333911252835202148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7880527679594570984.post-49458860123741970442013-07-25T11:41:33.872+05:302013-07-25T11:41:33.872+05:30Thank you. Yes, childern's story. Can be enjoy...Thank you. Yes, childern's story. Can be enjoyed by non-children too. :)Dipteehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13550275867184412533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7880527679594570984.post-25931985604343168902013-07-25T09:03:48.003+05:302013-07-25T09:03:48.003+05:30:D :D :D:D :D :Dinnerspacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02679126088804973632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7880527679594570984.post-20550657008156986172013-07-25T09:02:07.481+05:302013-07-25T09:02:07.481+05:30The second ending definitely but with a Diptea twi...The second ending definitely but with a Diptea twist. This looks a bit rough cut.Brilliant style,brilliant creation.But only children's story? Nah,I don't agree.innerspacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02679126088804973632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7880527679594570984.post-22230841663816892072013-07-23T09:37:23.900+05:302013-07-23T09:37:23.900+05:30Shubhayan, I had guessed you would like the second...Shubhayan, I had guessed you would like the second one. (Wow! I know my readers well. :D )<br /><br />There was a 1500 word limit hence making it more descriptive was a little difficult. <br /><br />And I agree the second one was hurried.Dipteehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13550275867184412533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7880527679594570984.post-49994176039649498372013-07-23T09:36:53.425+05:302013-07-23T09:36:53.425+05:30Thanks, Rajrupa. And thanks for visiting my blog. ...Thanks, Rajrupa. And thanks for visiting my blog. :)Dipteehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13550275867184412533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7880527679594570984.post-66990939995540326722013-07-23T09:34:10.629+05:302013-07-23T09:34:10.629+05:30Yes, the first one is a pleasant one. That was the...Yes, the first one is a pleasant one. That was the one I had originally written. I just reworked the ending in the dark one, which is probably why it seems a little out of place.Dipteehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13550275867184412533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7880527679594570984.post-17851133607887862092013-07-23T09:31:52.715+05:302013-07-23T09:31:52.715+05:30Abhishek, I was guessing you would like the second...Abhishek, I was guessing you would like the second one.Dipteehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13550275867184412533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7880527679594570984.post-63430245093011455702013-07-23T09:30:54.490+05:302013-07-23T09:30:54.490+05:30Yeah. Prashanth decided to send in the dark one fo...Yeah. Prashanth decided to send in the dark one for voting. :)<br /><br />And yours was a good story. <br /><br />Edited your name. :)Dipteehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13550275867184412533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7880527679594570984.post-58080147588676687622013-07-22T19:54:03.621+05:302013-07-22T19:54:03.621+05:30The first ending!The first ending!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14419458025432181836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7880527679594570984.post-74983592920626750162013-07-22T17:41:02.327+05:302013-07-22T17:41:02.327+05:30The first half was brilliant till you came to the ...The first half was brilliant till you came to the point where Bhuto describes how elephants get eaten up by rabbits. But a proper description, not a second had narration would have helped here. Walking trees, hNa? What are you up to? I would definitely say the second ending was better. But it was hurried. Bhuto changes too soon into a demon.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05860108921627027993noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7880527679594570984.post-90462792788744455342013-07-22T13:24:53.195+05:302013-07-22T13:24:53.195+05:30We need better pictures of yours. Dark is quite un...We need better pictures of yours. Dark is quite understandable. But tall (Since I have met you in person, I somewhat agree) and handsome in uncomprehending from you single eye. Your FB pics, either show your back of enhance your darkness in the shade.....<br />Subhro's Worldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09053173393079416686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7880527679594570984.post-12807120790116969212013-07-22T13:05:25.357+05:302013-07-22T13:05:25.357+05:30I agree with Ghazala completely. I have always bee...I agree with Ghazala completely. I have always been telling you that go ahead with whatever comes naturally to you. The dark ending seems so forcefully done. The first one just blends in so well. It is pleasantly bright and has that just right shade of fantasy.Subhro's Worldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09053173393079416686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7880527679594570984.post-9573139537356374682013-07-22T13:02:58.081+05:302013-07-22T13:02:58.081+05:30The second. Mostly because I'm dark (I'm i...The second. Mostly because I'm dark (I'm ignoring the tall and handsome bits).Abhishek Mukherjeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04492031639536656851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7880527679594570984.post-3810514958069729752013-07-22T12:55:30.727+05:302013-07-22T12:55:30.727+05:30Dear Dips,
So this was your story. I had read the ...Dear Dips,<br />So this was your story. I had read the dark ending. However, I prefer the other one. As it sits well with the mood of the story. You have a great future in writing for the kids. You are a natural. Do consider it seriously :)<br /><br />Thanks for the mention, coming from you it is a real compliment. Do edit my name spelling, it is Ghazala Hossian. Hugs ~<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14831956192459960019noreply@blogger.com