“This post is written for the 110 Creative Challenge Contest, hosted by Thewhitescape“
Theme: Friend
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Theme: Friend
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Once upon a time, many years ago, they were the best of
friends. Such strong was their bond,
that they could have easily been the inspiration for all the cute friendship
quotes.
But as we know, good things don’t last forever.
One day, she betrayed him. Things took a very bitter turn.
There were tears, heartache and they finally parted ways.
Today, she saw him across the road. He hadn’t noticed her.
He was about to cross the road, he would surely see her then.
She did not want that. She couldn’t face him now. She had to walk away.
She turned around, took a step…. Snap! Her sandal broke.
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I won this one. :D
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I won this one. :D
Nice twist. Whatever I had been expecting, it wasn't this.
ReplyDeletevery nice.
ReplyDeletegood
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DeleteAccha, so your strength is the simplicity of the climax.....u build it up nicely, letting the readers get this premonition that sumthing darker and much more sinister was on its way.....and then snap, a sandal breaks...... Delightful
ReplyDelete:) well, thanks. Not to sure if that is a strength. I just like anti-climax I guess.
Deletei guess it's a strength :)
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Deletehahaha happens with me!!!!!
ReplyDelete:( shouldn't happen with anyone!
DeleteLovely... As you say, short...!!! But I am your traditional reader. I have so many questions.. !! Why did she not want to face him? What happened?
ReplyDeleteAah, some questions are best left unanswered. :)
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